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| Dillon0909 | Date: Mo, 31.October.11, 4:55 PM | Message # 1 |
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| I held my head in pain and looked around. I was in some sort of...big...office area. This was so weird...I remember...something attacking me, gun shots, and men in black knocking me out. I looked around and to my horror, I saw a woman dressed in old time clothing, who was nearly transparent.
She began talking "Welcome to the man made contry of Zanna, I am it's original owner and creator Gertrud Yontre, I prefer the Phantom of Zanna. You are probably confused so I'll explain." She cleared her throat and said "Due to some means, you became a member of the supernatural comunity, this country exists to keep both sides happy so to speak. Normal people get to have normal lives, and supernatural creatures exist with out the fear of being destroyed. Judging by how fast your bite mark on your leg healed I say you are now a Werewolf."
I looked at her confused "Werewolf? Okay...WHAT?!"
She sighed and said "I know this is a little hard to belive but you are indeed now a werewolf. Through our research there are 6 factions of the supernatural comunity: Vampire, Werewolf, Zombie, Ghost, Dragon Creature, and Man Made." She then pointed to two charts "However there are rumors of Angels and Demons, however none are on this island.
Each have there own comuity strength and weaknesses:
Vampires: are awake at night, drink mostly animal blood, and have a coven. They are weak against garlic, crosses, and well...a sharp pointy stick. They own the only castle in the contry, and live a very privlaged life style.
Werewolves: Live in a cave close to the Vampires, don't really have much but they are happy that way, We feed them animals because it keeps them happy, and they are weak against anything silver. Both Vampires and Werewolves hate each other, and both sides have banned each other from even seeing each other.
Zombies: they do live in the grave and we...admittly hand them fake humans so they can rip them apart
Ghosts: Live whenever they want, and don't eat, and are invincible to all melee attack.
Dragon Creatures: are humans that are half Dragon and half human. They have a private mountain tops, and come down rarely
Man Made: They like ghosts live when ever they want...and retty much live a normal life out side of being created by men.
Angels have been rumored to live on a cloud, and Demons have been rumored to live underground but it is a rumor."
She looked at me and said "Welcome to Zanna, werewolf, have a nice day."
Chareter Sheet:
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Species(See above):
Bio:
Ablities(For Vampires/Angels/Demons/Dragon Creatures only. Extra ability)
Extra.
Name: Donoven "Donny" Bards
Age: 18
Appeance: Black jeans, black jacket, black shirt, and a wolf paw amulet.
Species: Werewolf
Bio: (See above)
Ablities: Traditional Werewolf abilities
Extra: Is the newest entrant to the island.
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:26 AM | Message # 1451 |
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Donny:
I smiled and said "Don't take my line"
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:35 AM | Message # 1452 |
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| Lily
I smiled. "Fine."
(It's really good, I like the plot line and it's an interesting twist on a post-apocolyptic type of story. Personally, and I love it, believe me, but some parts go by a bit quick and feel rushed and in the process of that, sometimes things get confusing. That's what I can see so far :3 I used to beta for fanfiction so I'm used to this)
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:36 AM | Message # 1453 |
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Donny:
I smiled and kissed her on the lips.
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:40 AM | Message # 1454 |
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Lily
I smiled and kissed him back but kept it simple.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:41 AM | Message # 1455 |
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| (Favorite chareter so far?)
Donny:
I smiled and broke it and said "Lets go for a walk"
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:44 AM | Message # 1456 |
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| (Tyrone :3)
Lily
"That sounds nice," I said.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:45 AM | Message # 1457 |
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Donny:
I smiled and took a walk with her with an unbrella to keep her from the sun
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:50 AM | Message # 1458 |
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| Lily
"Thanks for the umbrella," I said sincerely.
(he seems more sincere, and I like the way you made him different than what Cassidy expected of him)
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:52 AM | Message # 1459 |
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| Donny:
I smiled and said "You're welcome"
(Mine's Hunter, obviously, he's the main chareter, and actually pretty damn smart. Second favorite, is Cassidy, because she's not some pretty face, she'd straight up kick your ass if she could. All though for build up alone, I'd have to go with Papa.)
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:57 AM | Message # 1460 |
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| Lily
"I wonder why Daddy has a meeting with other counts today," I said.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 2:58 AM | Message # 1461 |
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| Donny;
I shook my head and sighed.
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 3:03 AM | Message # 1462 |
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| Lily
"You okay?"
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 3:07 AM | Message # 1463 |
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| Donny:
I smiled and held her hand.
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 3:10 AM | Message # 1464 |
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| Lily
I smiled, just enjoying the silence.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 3:11 AM | Message # 1465 |
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| Donny:
I walked to our lake.
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 3:16 AM | Message # 1466 |
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| Lily
I smiled. "I remember this,"
Laeci
"Dad?" I asked quietly, walking forwar.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 3:17 AM | Message # 1467 |
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| Tyler:
I looked at her and said "What"
Donny:
I smiled and said "I thought you'd like it"
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 3:24 AM | Message # 1468 |
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| Lily
"I do," I smiled.
Laeci
"I was wondering...if I could spend the day with you..." I said sheepishly.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 3:25 AM | Message # 1469 |
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| Donny:
I looked at her and said "I love you"
Tyler:
"If you want"
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 3:30 AM | Message # 1470 |
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| Laeci
"Only if you want to because it's not really fun if it's only one sided but I've missed...a lot of time to spend with you and..." I continued on rambling, nervous.
Lily
"Love you too."
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 4:01 PM | Message # 1471 |
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| Tyler:
I looked at her and said "Sure"
Donny:
I sat down and looked at the lake and her beautiful reflection.
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 4:10 PM | Message # 1472 |
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| Laeci
"You don't sound to excited," I mumbled.
Lily
I smiled at him, seeing him look at me in my reflection.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 4:13 PM | Message # 1473 |
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| Tyler:
I looked at her and said "I'm not, but you have a point"
Donny;
I smiled and drew a heart around her reflection.
I love Spooky Crap :D
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| Narutard | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 4:15 PM | Message # 1474 |
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| Lily
I laughed.
Laeci
"Well I don't really wanna do it if you're going to be sulking the whole time..."
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Fr, 30.December.11, 4:18 PM | Message # 1475 |
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| Tyler:
"I won't be"
Donny:
I smiled and kissed her cheek.
I love Spooky Crap :D
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