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Criminal Minds
Dillon0909Date: Su, 04.March.12, 2:55 AM | Message # 1
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"This is my city...the police are under my thumbs, the people hold me as some sort of hero, the FBI stay away for personal saftey, and my employees make a hefty profit no matter what rank they are. This is my city, the place is booming with plenty of citizens enjoying their lives, not minding the fact that my family is every where, my rivals are to afraid to rise up against me, and my will will keep it going. This is my city, and I'll see it burn before I give it up." - Trey Honcerni, head of the Honcerni crime family.

"This place used to be a peaceful place. The people did what they do, Crime was at an all time low, and everyone was...happy. However, he came and lived in this city...he came and he imposed his will. Trey Honcerni, the head of the Honcerni crime family. His criminal exploits started small, small enough not to be noticed by me or my men. Than it got bigger, until a man under his employee, became mayor. Now this place is darker, alot of people rarely go out any more, not wanting to risk their lives. I've been trying to restore this city, bujt I don't know if I even can, or if I even want to" - Police Cheif Harvy Gint

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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:08 AM | Message # 1351
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Tommy:

I smiled and said "K, Tony"

"Say over coffee, at one?"


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 1:21 AM | Message # 1352
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Kelly
"That sounds nice," I said.

Tony
I leapt into my car and just drove. What the hell...


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:22 AM | Message # 1353
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Tommy:

I smiled and said "Thank you"


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 1:34 AM | Message # 1354
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Kelly
I grabbed his hand and wrote my number down. "Here's my number, feel free to text or call," I smiled. "I look forward to coffee," I waved, walking out.


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:34 AM | Message # 1355
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Tommy:

I smiled and said "I'll look forward to it"


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 1:40 AM | Message # 1356
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Kelly
I got into my car, smiling as I drove home.

Tony
I returned back, worried.


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:45 AM | Message # 1357
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Tommy:

I smiled as Tony returned home. "What a nice girl"


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 1:47 AM | Message # 1358
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Tony
"Mhmm," I said nervously.


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:53 AM | Message # 1359
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Tommy:

I smiled and said "Hold me calls, I'm going to get coffee at one"

(Have Paige spy on them and get the wrong idea? Also, I just realized that this is a reverse Batman and Catwoman...that is flipping awsome)


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 1:58 AM | Message # 1360
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(Is it going to turn out on cheating? Just curious?)
Tony
"Yes sir," I said quietly.

Paige
I was humming quietly as I cleaned around the house.


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 2:05 AM | Message # 1361
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(not at first, at first its just going to be two people becoming close friends, but the point of having Paige get the idea is for the whole love triangle thing to work. I want Paige to have a moral choice like I did with Trey and Harvy for Tommy. I know I probably should have let you come up with your own story devices, but I thought this would be fun, and a more interesting take compared to the last time we did a love triangle, in Country of Zanna. I'm thinking of jealous rage between the two ladies puts them in a fight, with Paige winning and she has a choice between killing Kelly or letting her live.

To make this up to you however, I want you to tell me ANY idea you've had for any thread, and I will go along with it blindly)

Tommy:

I smiled and said "Whats the matter man?" I kissed Paige on the cheek and left for the car


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 2:10 AM | Message # 1362
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Tony
"Nothing..." I said.

Paige
I watched him go with a sigh.

Kelly
I waved my officers away, bored.

(It's fine, and I'll keep that in mind, though I can't think of any right now)


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 2:12 AM | Message # 1363
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Tommy:

I smiled and walked in the Police Office, and I walked into Kelly's office.


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 2:16 AM | Message # 1364
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Kelly
I looked up. "Hi," I smiled.


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 2:18 AM | Message # 1365
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Tommy:

I smiled 'Ready for coffee"


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 2:19 AM | Message # 1366
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Kelly
"Yep," I said.

Paige
"Hey Lily," I said, walking into her room. "Wanna go out?"


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 2:22 AM | Message # 1367
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Lily:

I smiled "I'm fine, but if you want"

Tommy:

I smiled as we walked to the car.


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 2:23 AM | Message # 1368
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Kelly
I walked beside him, smiling.

Paige
"Please?" Iasked, smiling.


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 2:25 AM | Message # 1369
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Lily:

I smiled and left with her

Tommy:

I parked at the coffee shop, as she and I started to talk relationship,her starting with her exboyfriend.


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 12:49 PM | Message # 1370
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Tommy:

I smiled "Well, I met Paige in the park, she tossed a ball at my head, and we argued for a while"

Lily:

I smiled ,than looked to the left "Hey isn't that Tommy"


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 12:53 PM | Message # 1371
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Paige
I turned as we sat and saw him, sitting with the most beautiful woman I had every seen. I stared in amazement, shocked.

Kelly
I laughed. "Sounds like love at first site."


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 12:55 PM | Message # 1372
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Tommy:

I laughed "Nah, we didn't start dating until I was hit bya car driven by the lead of the Yakuza. The same gang kidnapped her, and violated her, so...she clang to me for support, we've been dating ever since"

Lily:

"I can't hear what they are saying"


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 12:59 PM | Message # 1373
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Paige
"They look like they're having fun," I said quietly.

Kelly
"Oh...wow..." I said, looking at him.


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Dillon0909Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:01 PM | Message # 1374
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Tommy:

"Yeah...so how did you get the job as chief of the police, I thought that the cops had to choose their leader?"

Lily:

"Yeah" I said worried.


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NarutardDate: Su, 15.April.12, 1:04 PM | Message # 1375
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Paige
I looked at Lily. "You said you weren't hungry?"

Kelly
I smiled. "The officers at the station love me, and they knew I was strong and able to lead with ease so it wasn't hard chosing."


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