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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 04.March.12, 2:55 AM | Message # 1 |
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| "This is my city...the police are under my thumbs, the people hold me as some sort of hero, the FBI stay away for personal saftey, and my employees make a hefty profit no matter what rank they are. This is my city, the place is booming with plenty of citizens enjoying their lives, not minding the fact that my family is every where, my rivals are to afraid to rise up against me, and my will will keep it going. This is my city, and I'll see it burn before I give it up." - Trey Honcerni, head of the Honcerni crime family.
"This place used to be a peaceful place. The people did what they do, Crime was at an all time low, and everyone was...happy. However, he came and lived in this city...he came and he imposed his will. Trey Honcerni, the head of the Honcerni crime family. His criminal exploits started small, small enough not to be noticed by me or my men. Than it got bigger, until a man under his employee, became mayor. Now this place is darker, alot of people rarely go out any more, not wanting to risk their lives. I've been trying to restore this city, bujt I don't know if I even can, or if I even want to" - Police Cheif Harvy Gint
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 0:28 AM | Message # 1351 |
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| Tommy:
"To be fair he was holding my girlfriend up by gun point"
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 0:33 AM | Message # 1352 |
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| Kelly
I laughed quietly. "Of course you would have a girlfriend he could use. I am Kelly, and nothing like my father."
Tis now the very witching time of night when hell itself breathes contagion
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 0:39 AM | Message # 1353 |
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| Tommy:
I smiled and said "Sorry about your Daddy dearist...its the nature of this job. I take it your here to arrest me? It won't last long...I made it clear to both the Mayor, and to the people my dad worked with over the years, I am in charge, and I will do what my father has done, but with some improvments. For example, any one who owed me protection money, got a hudge pay cut, to about 500 bucks, as supposed to the 2000 dad charged."
I than laughed "So, you see, I'll be in court for...two minutes, let go and I leave laughing my ass off at your efforts."
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 0:50 AM | Message # 1354 |
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| Kelly
"Whoever said I was here to arrest you?" I asked. "I came here to make you a business partner. I'm not stupid."
Tis now the very witching time of night when hell itself breathes contagion
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 0:51 AM | Message # 1355 |
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| Tommy:
I laughed and said "Smart girl" I extended my hand "The names Tommy by the way.
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 0:57 AM | Message # 1356 |
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| Kelly
I took his hand gently, warm and confident. "Kelly," I repeat.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 0:58 AM | Message # 1357 |
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| Tommy:
"If you don't mind me saying, you are a very attractive lady"
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:04 AM | Message # 1358 |
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| Kelly
My lips curved into a smile. "Why thank you, you're quite attractive yourself.
Tony
I watched with wide eyes.
Tis now the very witching time of night when hell itself breathes contagion
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:05 AM | Message # 1359 |
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| Tommy:
I simled and said "I happen to have a girlfriend, but that doesn't mean we can't hang out"
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:07 AM | Message # 1360 |
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| Tony
"I forgot a few protection payments yesterday, I'll see you tonight man," I mumbled, pushing my way out.
Kelly
I watched him and shrugged. "That sounds delightful," I smiled.
Tis now the very witching time of night when hell itself breathes contagion
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:08 AM | Message # 1361 |
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| Tommy:
I smiled and said "K, Tony"
"Say over coffee, at one?"
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:21 AM | Message # 1362 |
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| Kelly
"That sounds nice," I said.
Tony
I leapt into my car and just drove. What the hell...
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:22 AM | Message # 1363 |
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| Tommy:
I smiled and said "Thank you"
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:34 AM | Message # 1364 |
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| Kelly
I grabbed his hand and wrote my number down. "Here's my number, feel free to text or call," I smiled. "I look forward to coffee," I waved, walking out.
Tis now the very witching time of night when hell itself breathes contagion
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:34 AM | Message # 1365 |
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| Tommy:
I smiled and said "I'll look forward to it"
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:40 AM | Message # 1366 |
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| Kelly
I got into my car, smiling as I drove home.
Tony
I returned back, worried.
Tis now the very witching time of night when hell itself breathes contagion
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:45 AM | Message # 1367 |
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| Tommy:
I smiled as Tony returned home. "What a nice girl"
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:47 AM | Message # 1368 |
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| Tony
"Mhmm," I said nervously.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:53 AM | Message # 1369 |
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| Tommy:
I smiled and said "Hold me calls, I'm going to get coffee at one"
(Have Paige spy on them and get the wrong idea? Also, I just realized that this is a reverse Batman and Catwoman...that is flipping awsome)
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 1:58 AM | Message # 1370 |
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| (Is it going to turn out on cheating? Just curious?)
Tony
"Yes sir," I said quietly.
Paige
I was humming quietly as I cleaned around the house.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 2:05 AM | Message # 1371 |
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| (not at first, at first its just going to be two people becoming close friends, but the point of having Paige get the idea is for the whole love triangle thing to work. I want Paige to have a moral choice like I did with Trey and Harvy for Tommy. I know I probably should have let you come up with your own story devices, but I thought this would be fun, and a more interesting take compared to the last time we did a love triangle, in Country of Zanna. I'm thinking of jealous rage between the two ladies puts them in a fight, with Paige winning and she has a choice between killing Kelly or letting her live.
To make this up to you however, I want you to tell me ANY idea you've had for any thread, and I will go along with it blindly)
Tommy:
I smiled and said "Whats the matter man?" I kissed Paige on the cheek and left for the car
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 2:10 AM | Message # 1372 |
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| Tony
"Nothing..." I said.
Paige
I watched him go with a sigh.
Kelly
I waved my officers away, bored.
(It's fine, and I'll keep that in mind, though I can't think of any right now)
Tis now the very witching time of night when hell itself breathes contagion
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 2:12 AM | Message # 1373 |
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| Tommy:
I smiled and walked in the Police Office, and I walked into Kelly's office.
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| Narutard | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 2:16 AM | Message # 1374 |
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| Kelly
I looked up. "Hi," I smiled.
Tis now the very witching time of night when hell itself breathes contagion
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Su, 15.April.12, 2:18 AM | Message # 1375 |
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| Tommy:
I smiled 'Ready for coffee"
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