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| Narutard | Date: Th, 04.August.11, 7:51 PM | Message # 1 |
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| The seas have disappeared. Most of our ships are stuck in the sand of what used to be ocean. New continents have been formed but population has drastically fallen. Why? It rarely rains now and when it does, it's only near lakes and rivers. But, we of Pirate Island have created irrigation systems for our crops and easily domesticated animals for our meaty needs.
Pirate Island is one island of secen harbored in the one last ocean in the world, the Atlantic. No one really knows why, but it's led to rumors that the Americans, the ONLY prostering country, are the ones who stole the water of the world. Anyways, seven islands remain in the low water levels of the Atlantic ocean and they are all owned, well, ruled, by pirates. Our Pirate Island is ruled by Captain Phoenix, one of the Seven Scourges of the sea. Naturally, the other six islands are owned by the other Scourges.
Captain Phoenix is the youngest of the scourges, and suprisingly harbors the fieryist personality, hense the name. But the personality is only half of it, her bright red hair carries the name for her. Oh yeah, did I mention Captain Phoenix is a hirl? The only girl Scourge, 16 years old, and Captain of Pirate Island. We are her crew and now her colony, and we prepare for war. Captain Phoenix has angered the Scourges again and now we have to wage battles against all six crews of the most powerful pirates in the world. Personally, I'm not worried about us, the crew, we're trained and stubborn. The one I'm worried about is Captain Phoenix. She has to fight each and every Scourge and though she is a Scourge herself, she is the smallest, youngest, least experienced and, more importantly, a girl. But, all we can do is cheer her on and fight our own battles.
Xander, the Pirate, Lieutenant Captain
Tis now the very witching time of night when hell itself breathes contagion
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 2:49 PM | Message # 4401 |
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Cain:
I smiled as the rest of us followed her
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| Narutard | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 8:51 PM | Message # 4402 |
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Dianne
After the first hour, I still had a little pep in my walk but as the second hour rolled around even I was dragging a little.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 9:03 PM | Message # 4403 |
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Natayla:
I sighed and said "Dad said to take the sled..."I teased Dianne
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| Narutard | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 9:32 PM | Message # 4404 |
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| Dianne
"You shut up," I said, looking at her. "Hmph," I walked faster.
(What kind of suggestions like...what you can do or what...)
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 10:02 PM | Message # 4405 |
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Natayla:
I sighed and followed her "Wait..."
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| Narutard | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 10:03 PM | Message # 4406 |
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| Dianne
"What?"
(Well, you know the personalities of your characters?)
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 10:08 PM | Message # 4407 |
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Natayla:
"SOrry, its just...what if he doesn't like me that much?"
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| Narutard | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 10:21 PM | Message # 4408 |
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| Dianne
"Why wouldn't he..."
(Well...pull the character's traits into their fighting. Someone stubborn would fight stubbornly, such as relentlessly driving and never giving up, or a quiet fighter would always stand on the defensive, watching and waiting. Include their thoughts, their analyzations.)
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 10:23 PM | Message # 4409 |
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Natayla:
I sighed and said "I'm not related to you"
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| Narutard | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 10:30 PM | Message # 4410 |
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| Dianne
"Neither is Cain," I shrugged.
(not yet)
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 10:34 PM | Message # 4411 |
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Natayla:
"But your his girlfriend...I just...don't know if he'd like me thats all"
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| Narutard | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 10:39 PM | Message # 4412 |
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| Dianne
"But your my brother's boyfriend," I said, only mocking her slightly.
(I'll get around to it sorry, fighting sleep already...)
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| Dillon0909 | Date: Tu, 20.March.12, 10:51 PM | Message # 4413 |
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Natayla:
I sighed "I know its just..." I stopped "The last time I was here Storm got shot, you started to like me only to hate me again, and even Cain doesn't like me at this point. I'm a screw up"
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| Narutard | Date: We, 21.March.12, 7:10 AM | Message # 4414 |
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| Dianne
"If I hated you, you wouldn't be here," I stated simply, walking on.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: We, 21.March.12, 12:26 PM | Message # 4415 |
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| Natayla:
I walked with her, quietly. Storm shaking his head at my actions.
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| Narutard | Date: We, 21.March.12, 5:31 PM | Message # 4416 |
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| Dianne
I began to kick a rock to ease the boredom away.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: We, 21.March.12, 8:36 PM | Message # 4417 |
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| Natayla;
"DIanne..." I siad quietly "I'm sorry for getting your brother shot that day"
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| Narutard | Date: We, 21.March.12, 8:43 PM | Message # 4418 |
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| Dianne
"Yeah, whatever," I mumbled. "Thanks for the apology."
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| Dillon0909 | Date: We, 21.March.12, 8:45 PM | Message # 4419 |
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| Natayla:
"You're welcome" I said walking with her.
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| Narutard | Date: We, 21.March.12, 8:49 PM | Message # 4420 |
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| Dianne
I kicked the rock in front of her, wanting her to kick it too.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: We, 21.March.12, 8:53 PM | Message # 4421 |
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| Natayla:
I kicked it at her, and smiled at her
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| Narutard | Date: We, 21.March.12, 9:04 PM | Message # 4422 |
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| Dianne
I kicked it back, smiling.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: We, 21.March.12, 9:11 PM | Message # 4423 |
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| Natayla;
She made me smile as we were basically playing Rock kick tennis.
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| Narutard | Date: We, 21.March.12, 9:16 PM | Message # 4424 |
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| Dianne
My foot connected with it too hard and it went flying. I heard it stop abruptly and looked up. "Uncle!" I said happily, seeing he had stopped it with his foot.
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| Dillon0909 | Date: We, 21.March.12, 9:18 PM | Message # 4425 |
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| Natayla:
I smiled and looked at her Uncle...who looked at Dianne
Blackbeard:
"Dianne! How's my favorite Great-Niece"
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